Thus week for writing we were challanged to make a poem for our writing task. I really enjoy writing ryhming peoms so thats what I did. I decided to go for a walk around the block and admire my surroundings for the poem. This is what I came up with.
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Excellent poem Eilish, well done
ReplyDeleteKa pai Eilish!
ReplyDeleteThis is an awesome poem that really paints a picture of what you experienced on your walk. One suggestion could be a super catchy title for next time. Keep up the awesome work!